воскресенье, 22 апреля 2012 г.

  Have you ever taken part in a talent concert? Yes,I have. Three years ago in the end of the fourth quarter I had a school concert. It was in fourth class.This concert was very great!
  I felt very well. I did not worry about my speech.I belived in myself and I had got a very good mood.
  At the concert I have been a cowboy.There I danced, told  jokes and did many other things. I had got a very beautifull suit: white hat, black boots and jens, shirt with a jacket.Many people, who saw this concert laughed and were very funny! 
  In the end of the concert to our class was given diplomas and prizes!
  It was very good times!

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  1. I like your article, but pay attention to some things:
    1.Yes,I have.
    2. It was in fourth class.
    3. I felt very well.
    4. and I had got a very good mood.
    5. At the concert I have been a cowboy.
    6. I had got a very beautifull suit: white hat, black boots and jens, shirt with a jacket.
    7. It was very good times!

    Your mark is EXCELLENT.

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